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		<title>500 Words</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 30 Jan 2012 18:28:03 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Tommy Donbavand</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[In case you missed it, check out this brilliant short story writing contest for kids aged 13 and under &#8211; sponsored by BBC Radio 2! 500 Words was launched on this morning&#8217;s Chris Evans Breakfast Show.  All you have to do is write and submit a story of 500 words or under, and you could [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In case you missed it, check out this brilliant short story writing contest for kids aged 13 and under &#8211; sponsored by <a href="http://www.bbc.co.uk/radio2/500words/2012/" target="_blank"><strong>BBC Radio 2</strong></a>!</p>
<p style="text-align: center;"><a href="http://www.tommydonbavand.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/01/500words.jpg"><img title="500 Words" src="http://www.tommydonbavand.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/01/500words-480x150.jpg" alt="" width="480" height="150" /></a></p>
<p><a href="http://www.bbc.co.uk/radio2/500words/2012/" target="_blank"><strong>500 Words</strong></a> was launched on this morning&#8217;s <a href="http://www.bbc.co.uk/radio2/500words/2012/" target="_blank"><strong>Chris Evans Breakfast Show</strong></a>.  All you have to do is write and submit a story of 500 words or under, and you could win some fabulous prizes &#8211; including Chris&#8217;s height in books, and £500 worth of books for your school library!</p>
<p>So, check out the <a href="http://www.bbc.co.uk/radio2/500words/2012/" target="_blank"><strong>competition home page</strong></a>, and get writing!</p>
<p>Full details here: <a href="http://www.bbc.co.uk/radio2/500words/2012/" target="_blank"><strong>http://www.bbc.co.uk/radio2/500words/2012/</strong></a></p>
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		<title>On Being Inappropriate</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 04 Jan 2012 03:51:21 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Sam Enthoven</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Moving (gratefully) to cojones of a metaphorical nature, I&#8217;m enormously inspired by this awesome interview with Maurice Sendak, which I caught last week on Boing Boing. Anyone hoping for a sequel to Where the Wild Things Are might want to prepare themselves for bad news, though. ;p Sam]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Moving (gratefully) to <em>cojones</em> of a metaphorical nature, I&#8217;m enormously inspired by this awesome interview with <strong><a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Maurice_Sendak">Maurice Sendak</a>,</strong> which I caught <strong><a href="http://boingboing.net/2011/12/30/interview-with-jolly-old-mauri.html">last week on Boing Boing</a></strong>.</p>
<p><iframe width="560" height="315" src="http://www.youtube.com/embed/xXAjkLUv7dY?rel=0" frameborder="0" allowfullscreen></iframe></p>
<p>Anyone hoping for a sequel to <em>Where the Wild Things Are</em> might want to prepare themselves for bad news, though. ;p</p>
<p>Sam</p>
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		<title>How To End A Story, How To Rant On Facebook</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 16 Nov 2011 01:34:50 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Joe Craig</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Whatever desire or need drives the story is fulfilled or finally dashed at the end. If anyone is struggling with their ending, it's usually because there isn't a strong enough desire or need driving their story. This is a problem with their story, their character, their entire world and everything they've written.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>A friend of mine is a teacher (I&#8217;m not showing off, that&#8217;s not the end of the sentence. READ ON YOU FOOL) and she just got in touch <a href="https://www.facebook.com/jcpages.joecraig">through facebook</a> to ask me:</p>
<p><em><strong>&#8220;Do you have any ideas about activities I could do with my Year 13s to help them think about how to end a story?&#8221;</strong></em></p>
<p>She&#8217;s a teacher. Did I mention that? Cool, right?</p>
<p>Anyway, while I didn&#8217;t really have any practical ideas to help her, I did have a little rant about story endings. Here it is in its entirety, as I typed it. Yes, this is how I type messages on facebook, including all the random capitalisations and exclamations.</p>
<p>I said:</p>
<p><span>PICK MY BRAINS! OK. I&#8217;ll not write my new book for the next few minutes, I&#8217;ll give myself entirely to YOU.</span></p>
<p><span>The way I look at it, the ending of a story MUST be planned out before you start. Great director Alexander Mackendrick (<a href="http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0533241/" target="_blank">http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0533241/</a>) said: &#8220;If you&#8217;ve got a beginning, but don&#8217;t yet have an end, then you&#8217;re mistaken. You don&#8217;t have the right beginning.&#8221;</span></p>
<p><span>So being stuck on your ending just means you haven&#8217;t planned things out properly or you haven&#8217;t written the beginning and the middle properly.</span></p>
<p><span>The trick is to START WITH THE ENDING. You need to do a session on story structure &#8211; ACTS. Do it like a mountain range.</span></p>
<p><span><br />
Or watch this video and translate it into whatever you like:<br />
<a href="http://youtu.be/oP3c1h8v2ZQ" target="_blank">http://youtu.be/oP3c1h8v2ZQ</a></span></p>
<p><span>Once you&#8217;re comfortable with the concept of a story being a series of UPS and DOWNS on that graph (or mountain range, or roller coaster or whatever) then an ENDING must be the final UP or DOWN. It&#8217;s the completion or final failure of the task that originated at the BEGINNING. (That&#8217;s why the beginning is so important to your ending. The ending is contained within everything implied by the beginning.)</span></p>
<p><span>Whatever desire or need drives the story is fulfilled or finally dashed at the end. If anyone is struggling with their ending, it&#8217;s usually because there isn&#8217;t a strong enough desire or need driving their story. This is a problem with their story, their character, their entire world and everything they&#8217;ve written.</span></p>
<p><span>You need to picture everything about your ending at every point that you&#8217;re writing the rest of your story. To be honest, it&#8217;s what keeps me writing: the desperate fear that I might DIE before reaching the point where I write the ending that&#8217;s living in my head and in my plans.</span></p>
<p><span>The magnitude of that final UP or DOWN of the ending must be bigger than any of the UPS orDOWNS along the way (the act climaxes).</span></p>
<p><span>There are also clever endings: the character fulfils his need/desire in stunning fashion (a big UP) but at the same time realises that wasn&#8217;t what he was really after all along, he really wanted something else (to find hinmself, to reconcile with his mother, whatever). That&#8217;s called an IRONIC ending (in the trade).</span></p>
<p><span>I suggest you get a short story they can read the entirety of pretty quickly (maybe LIFTERS? Hahahahahahaha advertising my own books in my facebook rants &#8211; EXCELLENT!) and get them comfortable with charting the ups &amp; downs of a character&#8217;s fortunes.</span></p>
<p><span><strong>*****SPOILERS HERE***** So don&#8217;t read the next paragraph if you don&#8217;t want to know what happens at the end of LIFTERS *****</strong></span></p>
<p><span>At the end of LIFTERS, for example, Adaq achieves what he thought his desire was at the beginning of the story &#8211; he now has the means to forget his life of crime and start a new life on his own two feet. But it&#8217;s come at a price. He no longer has his sister &#8211; perhaps what he really wanted, deep down, was to fix that relationship. He is also less sure about his own identity than he was at the start &#8211; maybe finding his own identity was really what he wanted all along, not money or independence.</span></p>
<p><span><strong>*****OK YOU CAN CARRY ON READING NOW - <a href="http://www.amazon.co.uk/gp/product/1445105551?ie=UTF8&amp;tag=joecraig-21&amp;linkCode=as2&amp;camp=1634&amp;creative=19450&amp;creativeASIN=1445105551">BUT WHY HAVEN&#8217;T YOU READ LIFTERS YET?</a>*****</strong></span></p>
<p><span>So is it an UP ending or a DOWN ending? I don&#8217;t know, but it&#8217;s a GOOD ending. Superficially it should be an UP, but it feels more like a DOWN.</span></p>
<p><span>Get them to think up ENDINGS that are either big UPS, big </span>DOWNS<span> or something more complicated. Then you can work backwards to plan out the rest of the story.</span></p>
<p><span>And now I will just finish. A surprise ending.</span></p>
<p><span>QUESTIONS FROM THE FLOOR PLEASE.</span></p>
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		<title>Bringing Boys to Books</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 08 Sep 2011 00:26:56 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Tommy Donbavand</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[If you&#8217;re interested in writing for children, and boys especially &#8211; you might like to read an article I&#8217;ve written for the October issue of Writing Magazine. Bringing Boys to Books looks at everything from plotting with boys in mind, to writing techniques that will help reluctant readers stick with your story and root for [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>If you&#8217;re interested in writing for children, and boys especially &#8211; you might like to read an article I&#8217;ve written for the October issue of <a href="https://www.writers-online.co.uk/Writing-Magazine/" target="_blank"><strong>Writing Magazine.</strong></a></p>
<p style="text-align: center;"><a href="http://www.tommydonbavand.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/09/boystobooks.jpg"><img title="Bringing Boys to Books" src="http://www.tommydonbavand.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/09/boystobooks.jpg" alt="" width="480" height="339" /></a></p>
<p><strong>Bringing Boys to Books</strong> looks at everything from plotting with boys in mind, to writing techniques that will help reluctant readers stick with your story and root for your characters.  I also included a list of top tips&#8230;</p>
<p><em>* Find the story boys will want to read.</em></p>
<p><em>* Create aspirational characters with clear goals.</em></p>
<p><em>* Stick to one or two viewpoints.</em></p>
<p><em>* Keep chapters, paragraphs and sentences short.</em></p>
<p><em>* Envision your story as a roller coaster.</em></p>
<p><em>* No tricks &#8211; allow your readers to stay in control.</em></p>
<p>I&#8217;d be interested to hear whether my fellow TBMers agree, or have tips of their own&#8230;</p>
<p>If you&#8217;d like to know more, check out the latest edition of <a href="https://www.writers-online.co.uk/Writing-Magazine/" target="_blank"><strong>Writing Magazine</strong></a>.</p>
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		<title>Putting in Chapters and Rewriting</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 06 Sep 2011 15:17:36 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Joe Craig</dc:creator>
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		<category><![CDATA[Joe's rambling again]]></category>
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		<description><![CDATA[Some writers do their plan in chapters - they work out what's going to happen in each chapter. I don't do that...]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div>Last week I had a message from a 13 year-old writer working on her first book. She asked me some really good questions about how I decide where to put a new chapter in my books, and also about whether I do much re-writing once I&#8217;ve finished the first version of my stories.</div>
<div>I thought there might be more people out there like her, so it might be useful for me to share some of what I said in reply:</div>
<div></div>
<div>Hi,</div>
<div></div>
<div>Thanks for your brilliant message. I&#8217;m really excited to hear that you&#8217;ve been working on a book!</div>
<div></div>
<div>Yes, I do always re-write parts of my books over and over again, but ONLY once I&#8217;ve finished writing a complete first draft. If you think about re-writing before you finish the first rough version then the editor part of your brain can get in the way of the creator part of your brain &#8211; and that&#8217;s what leads to writers&#8217; block!</div>
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<div>So what I do is forget about re-writing to start with, and just write something that I KNOW is going to be RUBBISH. It gives me the freedom to write ANYTHING without worrying about how good it&#8217;s going to be or even whether it makes sense. I don&#8217;t even re-read what I wrote the day before, I just pick up where I left off and CARRY ON WRITING. Then once I&#8217;ve reached the end of the story I go back and CHALLENGE EVERYTHING. It&#8217;s like switching a different bit of my brain back on again. It&#8217;s incredibly important to re-write.</div>
<div>I would never show my first draft (or even my second or third re-writes) to ANYBODY.</div>
<div></div>
<div>Now, the reason that I can just WRITE and keep going when I&#8217;m doing a first draft is because I&#8217;ve already PLANNED EVERYTHING OUT really carefully. That&#8217;s the first part of the process. I go over and over my story in an outline of the plot until it&#8217;s PERFECT and everything works beautifully. Only then do I start writing anything.</div>
<div></div>
<div>So what about chapters? I know roughly how long a chapter of one of my books should be (anywhere between 1500 and 3000 words, though some are longer and some are shorter) so when I&#8217;m re-writing I go roughly that many words through the text and look for a good place to break the story &#8211; either a natural break where the scene changes, or an UNNATURAL break where I can tweak what I&#8217;ve written to create a sort of mini-cliffhanger between chapters &#8211; in other words, breaking the middle of an action sequence or a scene and re-writing it where I&#8217;ve broken it so it reads like it&#8217;s the end of a chapter, then re-writing the next bit to sound like the start of a chapter.</div>
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<div>Some writers do their plan in chapters &#8211; they work out what&#8217;s going to happen in each chapter. I don&#8217;t do that. If it feels natural and obvious to put in a chapter break as I&#8217;m writing then I do, but otherwise I go through afterwards and work out (almost mathematically) where the chapter breaks should come. It&#8217;s about the rhythm of the story but also word count! And of course word count changes each time I re-write, because I&#8217;m always cutting or adding bits.</div>
<div></div>
<div>Here&#8217;s one more thought about RE-WRITING. Lots of writers will tell you that you have to do it, but not many will give you tips about HOW to do it. Here&#8217;s how I do it:</div>
<div></div>
<div>I have a list. My list has some items on it that never change, but other items are things that I&#8217;ve scribbled down as I&#8217;ve been writing the first draft because they&#8217;ve occurred to me at that moment, but it isn&#8217;t the moment to deal with them (because I don&#8217;t want to be distracted by RE-WRITING when I&#8217;m trying to just WRITE!).</div>
<div></div>
<div>My list will usually look something like this:</div>
<div></div>
<div>DIALOGUE</div>
<div>ACTION</div>
<div>JIMMY&#8217;S RELATIONSHIP WITH HIS FATHER</div>
<div>COLOURS</div>
<div>CUT</div>
<div>WATER</div>
<div>HUMOUR</div>
<div></div>
<div>and so on. The list usually ends up having about a dozen items on it.</div>
<div></div>
<div>Then I start at the beginning of what I&#8217;ve written and go through the whole story JUST looking at the first item on my list: for example, all the dialogue. I re-write every word of it. I beef it up, or tone it down. I tweak it or cut it or whatever. Through the whole book, ignoring everything else.</div>
<div></div>
<div>If something else obvious strikes me as I&#8217;m going through the book then fine, I address it, but basically I&#8217;m JUST looking at the first item on the list.</div>
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<div>Then I do the second item on the list. Again, I start at the beginning and go through the whole thing JUST looking at item number two.</div>
<div></div>
<div>For something like &#8216;JIMMY&#8217;S RELATIONSHIP WITH HIS FATHER&#8217; you might think that would involve only scenes that involve Jimmy and his father. But that&#8217;s not right. I look for ANY opportunity for the other characters and the rest of the story to show something about Jimmy and his father and that relationship. So it might be a scene where someone else talks about their father, or something much less obvious where someone does something in a slightly fatherly manner, or in one of my favourite scenes in the series, it can be Jimmy getting angry with a bottle top and throwing the bottle at the wall &#8211; it all adds up to create a fuller and more complex, interesting picture of Jimmy&#8217;s relationship with his father.</div>
<div></div>
<div>That&#8217;s just one example that&#8217;s always on my list. But I go through looking at ALL the relationships between the various characters.</div>
<div></div>
<div>Then, once I&#8217;ve gone through my whole list and for each item on the list gone through the whole book (sometimes more than once) I start again and look at the story as a whole and see what else comes to me. I go through it a few times and make a new list as I&#8217;m going through. Then I start the process again with my new list.</div>
<div></div>
<div>I keep doing this until I can&#8217;t find anything to put on another list.</div>
<div></div>
<div>So that&#8217;s how I re-write.</div>
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		<title>Submitting Your Manuscript</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 15 Aug 2011 18:53:59 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Tommy Donbavand</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Recently, I received an email from a Scream Street reader called Emily.  She asked a very important question&#8230; &#8212; Dear Tommy,                  It&#8217;s me again, Emily. I&#8217;ve written to you before and sent you a picture and I said I wanted to be an author when I grew up? I&#8217;m sorry to bother you again, [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href="http://www.tommydonbavand.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/08/tommyss1.jpg"><img title="Your manuscript?" src="http://www.tommydonbavand.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/08/tommyss1-480x360.jpg" alt="" width="480" height="360" align="left" /></a>Recently, I received an email from a <a href="http://www.screamstreet.co.uk" target="_blank"><strong>Scream Street</strong></a> reader called <strong>Emily</strong>.  She asked a very important question&#8230;</p>
<p>&#8212;</p>
<p><em>Dear Tommy,</em><br />
<em>                 It&#8217;s me again, Emily. I&#8217;ve written to you before and sent you a picture and I said I wanted to be an author when I grew up? I&#8217;m sorry to bother you again, but I&#8217;m typing out my book at the moment. The books are a series. So far, there are eight book, and I am nearly finished the ninth. I turned 15 two months ago, and have begun typing out the first book. The books are all written out by hand in A5 copies. But I&#8217;m not sure how to go about typing them out. </em><br />
<em>The books are in the fantasy/adventure genre. I&#8217;m pitching it to be for age 9+ readers. </em><br />
<em>When typing out the books, before sending them to publishers, can you give me some tips? I&#8217;d like to know things like, what font size should I use? Also, I have pictures in the books. When adding in the pictures, should I simply leave gaps in the text? The book is a series, so should I send off ALL the books, typed out as manuscripts, or should I just send off the first and see what they think? </em><br />
<em>I really, really value your thoughts! Thank you very, very much!</em></p>
<p><em>Yours sincerely,</em><br />
<em>Emily,</em><br />
<em>Ireland.</em></p>
<p>&#8212;</p>
<p>Formatting your manuscript is something you should strive to get right &#8211; but not obsess over. Here&#8217;s what I said to Emily in my reply&#8230;</p>
<p>&#8212;</p>
<p><em>Hi Emily</em></p>
<p><em>Thanks for your email &#8211; and a great question!  Many, many people who want to be authors simply ignore the important aspect for how to format their work before sending it to publishers &#8211; and they&#8217;re always rejected as a result.  It doesn&#8217;t take much effort to format correctly, but it puts you in the top 10% of submissions.</em></p>
<p><em>Here&#8217;s what to do&#8230;</em></p>
<p><em>Type everything double-spaced (i.e. there will be a blank line between each line of text).</em></p>
<p><em>Use a simple font, size 12.  I always use Arial, but some other writers use Courier or Times New Roman.  Just don&#8217;t pick anything fancy.  </em></p>
<p><em>Make sure there&#8217;s around an inch of white space on all four sides on your page.</em></p>
<p><em>Put your name and contact details on the title page, along with the word count.  On every other page, put your name and the book title in the header, and the page number in the footer.  This will help put things back in order if any of the pages get separated.</em></p>
<p><em>When printing your manuscript off, only ever use plain, white paper and print on one side of the page only.  Don&#8217;t bind your manuscript together in any way &#8211; no paperclips, no fasteners, nothing.  If you really need a way to keep the pages together, put a single elastic band around the manuscript.  Don&#8217;t try to make a cover for your manuscript, or include anything else other than the printed pages and a cover letter.  Some new writers send pictures or photographs or even gifts &#8211; but all that does is mark you out as an amateur.  Act professionally, and you&#8217;ll be treated that way.</em></p>
<p><em>Choose which publishers you contact carefully.  Sending your science-fiction novel to a publisher that only produces cook books or romance stories is just a waste of time.  Check publisher&#8217;s websites to see what type of books they publish.</em></p>
<p><em>Each publisher has  different instructions on what to send them.  Some of them just want a letter introducing your book for series in the first instance, others want a letter and the first three chapters.  Always check first.  Many of them will say what to send on their website but, if not, you can write or call to ask.  Then, if the publisher wants to see the finished book, they&#8217;ll ask for it.  never just send in the whole book (unless that&#8217;s what the publisher asks for).  In the case of a series, you can mention the other books in the covering letter.  Again, if the publisher wants to read them, they&#8217;ll ask.</em></p>
<p><em>At first &#8211; you will be rejected.  Everyone is.  I have two filing cabinets of rejection letters -  but you have to keep writing and keep submitting.  Never give up, keep writing, and you&#8217;ll get there.</em></p>
<p><em>Hope that helps!</em></p>
<p><em>Best wishes</em></p>
<p><em>Tommy</em></p>
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<p>How are you formatting <em>your</em> manuscripts?</p>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 24 May 2011 11:48:21 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Tommy Donbavand</dc:creator>
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>It seems as if social networks are always in the news these days &#8211;  whether it’s an unsigned band being snapped up through their MySpace  page, the usual round of Facebook privacy issues or Stephen Fry’s latest  pithy remark on Twitter.  Whether you use social media or not, all  those column inches should tell you something important &#8211; millions of  people are logging onto these sites day after day, which makes them the  ideal place to promote your books.</p>
<p>In this article, I’m going to try to show you how you can use the  various social networks to your advantage &#8211; but please be aware that  site layouts and options are regularly updated or changed, so you may  have to dig around a little to follow exactly what I’ve written.  It’s  also worth remembering that what works for one person may not be the  best choice for another.  So, play around with the platforms and find a  combination that works right for you.</p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p>MySpace</p>
<p>There was once a time when almost everyone on-line was using  MySpace.  As the first real social network, MySpace was learning what  its users wanted as it went along and &#8211; for that reason &#8211; it quickly  became a mixed up jumble of just about everything.</p>
<p>If you go to <a href="http://www.myspace.com/">www.myspace.com</a> today and sign up for a free account, you’ll find dozens and dozens of  garish, badly designed pages, blaring music at the end of every link and  more spam messages than you can fit in a teenage hacker’s inbox.  In  short &#8211; leave MySpace well alone.</p>
<p>That’s not to say there aren’t authors making MySpace work for them &#8211;  I know of one horror author who has given his antagonist a terrifying  yet hilarious page and teen horror scribe, Darren Shan, regularly  cross-posts new entries from his own blog &#8211; but those guys were there  from the start.  Nowadays, MySpace is full of wannabe bands trying to  play you their latest composition and teenage girls who like glittery  lettering and converse in text speak.</p>
<p>MySpace is dead; long live Facebook.  Perhaps&#8230;</p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p>Facebook</p>
<p>This one splits authors right down the middle.  There are those who  use Facebook effectively to promote their work, and others who believe  the site is just one short step away from eternity in the cold, hard  earth next to MySpace.  I think the truth is somewhere in-between.</p>
<p>I use Facebook to promote my work and stay in touch with my readers.   But there are a few simple guidelines to follow if you want to make the  site work for you.  These aren’t hard and fast rules &#8211; just suggestions  that have worked for me&#8230;</p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p><em>First &#8211; adjust your privacy settings.</em></p>
<p><em> </em>At the top right hand corner of your main Facebook page,  you’ll find a menu labelled ‘Account’.  Click on that and choose  ‘Privacy Settings’.  Here you can decide which parts of your profile  other people see.  I recommend setting everything to ‘Friends only’.   That way, only people you approve will have access to your personal  information.  If you are going to allow your readers to add you as a  friend &#8211; you may want to go a step further and keep some information &#8211;  such as your address and ‘phone numbers &#8211; off the profile completely.<em> </em></p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p><em>Decide whether to use Facebook for keeping in touch with friends  and family OR for promoting your work.  Using the site for both is a  tricky road to navigate.</em></p>
<p>If your readers find you on Facebook, they will try to add you as  friends.  Whether they’re too young to officially be members of the site  or not (the current sign-up age is 13), they will try to track you  down.  If you do decide to accept their friend requests, remember to  keep your photos and status updates suitable for the age group that will  see them (no snapshots of boozy barbecues or explicit rants about your  personal life).</p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p><em>Don’t start chatting!</em></p>
<p>If you do allow your fans to add you as a friend &#8211; do yourself a favour and <strong>log out of the internal Facebook chat system</strong> (currently at the bottom right of your page).  If your readers spot you  online, they’ll bombard you with messages and you won’t get any work  done ever again!  Just click ‘Go offline’, and they won’t be able to  bother you.</p>
<p>If the chat system is something you want to use, you may want to  consider not adding your readers and keeping Facebook for your friends  and family alone.</p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p><em>Leave Farmville alone!</em></p>
<p>And not just Farmville &#8211; I’d suggest you don’t sign up to any of the  seemingly endless supply of time-wasting applications you can now add on  Facebook.  I’m not trying to be a killjoy &#8211; but for every app you add,  your readers can use that app on their own profile page to interact with  you.</p>
<p>I prefer to keep a clean and streamlined Facebook page &#8211; and limit my  Newsfeed to status updates or newly added pictures.  I really don’t  want to hear how <em>Billy found a vole on his farm and successfully reared it for 150 points</em> so &#8211; any time anything like that appears on my home page, I hover my mouse over it and click the ‘Hide’ button that appears.</p>
<p>You may find that you are constantly invited to sign up for certain  applications &#8211; often by the same people over and over again.  This can  be dealt with by choosing to ignore the app in question, or to ignore  any further requests from that friend.</p>
<p>Again, I’m not meaning to sound harsh &#8211; but if you want to use  Facebook as a promotional tool &#8211; you simply can’t fill your profile full  of games and puzzles.</p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p><em>Start a fan page.</em></p>
<p>Another way to use Facebook to promote your books is to start a fan  page about your work, or even about yourself.  At the time of writing,  this is done by clicking on ‘Adverts and Pages’ from the menu at the  left of the page, and choosing ‘Create Page’.</p>
<p>You can now fill the page with information about your books and  invite people to become a fan of or ‘Like’ your page.  You can then post  photos to the gallery, start message board style discussions or message  everyone of your fans at the same time.</p>
<p>Before Facebook introduced Pages, the same result could be achieved  by starting a Group.  You can still do this (Groups &gt; Create a  Group), but they’re more or less exactly the same as Pages, so choose  one and stick with it.</p>
<p>Just like with a blog &#8211; you should try to update your page regularly  with news, links to reviews, forthcoming release dates, etc.  I’m often  guilty of forgetting to keep on top of my Facebook pages, but there’s  nothing that looks less appealing to a fan than logging on to find the  last comment you posted was six months ago &#8211; so if you promise to keep  your pages updated, so will I!</p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p><em>Remember that people can access what you post!</em></p>
<p><em> </em>I can’t stress this enough &#8211; everything you post online  stays online.  Even with the most draconian of privacy settings, there’s  nothing to stop someone in your friends list copying and pasting your  status update with “Hey, look what my favourite author just said&#8230;” in  front of it.  If you don’t want people to see it &#8211; don’t post it!<em> </em></p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p>That’s about it for Facebook.  But what about the other social networks out there, are they any good to use?</p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p>Bebo and Friendster and Diaspora, Oh My&#8230;</p>
<p>I’ve really not found a way to make the smaller social networks work  for book promotion.  They all do more or less the same as Facebook &#8211; and  that’s where the greatest number of people are.  So, if I were you, I’d  leave the others alone.</p>
<p>There are, however, more niche oriented social media sites from  Library Thing and Shelfari (books) to Last.FM (music) and Linked.In  (professional contacts).  You can now even add people as friends on  YouTube!  Whether you should use these sites or not is up to you &#8211; just  remember that every profile you have to update is time taken away from  your writing.</p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p>Twitter</p>
<p>You’ve probably heard plenty of things &#8211; both good and bad &#8211; about  what Twitter is.  But let’s start out by clarifying what it isn’t:  Twitter isn’t a way of finding out what other people are having for  lunch, or other such mundane trivia.  Sure &#8211; there are people who use  the service in that way &#8211; but you can simply ignore them.</p>
<p>Twitter is a micro-blogging service where you sign up for a free account (<a href="http://www.twitter.com/">www.twitter.com</a>)  and post short messages, called Tweets, of up to 140 characters  (including spaces and punctuation).  When signing up, you may find that  your preferred name has already been taken (there are millions of users,  after all), see if your book title is free for use &#8211; or try adding  ‘author’ or ‘books’ to the end of your name until you find one you’re  able to use.  Then you’re ready to start tweeting&#8230;</p>
<p>The only people who can read your tweets are those who sign up to  ‘follow’ you and, in the same way, the only tweets you get to see are  those sent by people you have chosen to follow.</p>
<p>There is a thriving publishing community on Twitter with authors,  agents, publishers and booksellers announcing new titles, running  competitions, posting links to articles of interest and even doing  business with one another.  I have been approached by several schools  and bookshops to arrange author visits via Twitter.  Plus, I’ve met some  valuable new contacts and even made a few friends there.</p>
<p>You’d be amazed at some of the people you can have direct access to  via the service (as I finished writing that last sentence, I glanced up  at my screen to see tweets from Father Ted creator Graham Linehan, US  author JA Konrath, actor Noel Clarke and a certain MC Hammer &#8211; yes, that  one!)  They can all be followed on Twitter &#8211; and they may even follow  you back.</p>
<p>Of course, Twitter isn’t just about following celebrities (although  if a link to your site is tweeted by Stephen Fry, you’ll be swamped with  new visitors) &#8211; it’s a place to chat and share ideas.  Here’s how to  get stuck in&#8230;</p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p><em>Get a client.</em></p>
<p>Once you’ve signed up for a free account at <a href="http://www.twitter.com/">www.twitter.com</a>,  you can begin to follow people and send tweets right there from the  website &#8211; but it’s much easier to use a dedicated piece of software  called a ‘client’.  There are dozens of free Twitter clients out there  (just do a search in Google) and they all work in pretty much the same  way, so try a few until you find one you like.  A lot of people use  Tweetdeck (although I find it a bit too big for my needs) or, if you’re  on a Mac, I recommend Tweetie.</p>
<p>Once you’ve set up your account with your Twitter name (that thing  that starts with an ‘@’ symbol &#8211; I’m @tommydonbavand) and password, you  can start sending out tweets.  But there are a couple of things to  consider first&#8230;</p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p><em>Listen in for a while.</em></p>
<p><em> </em>Take a bit of time to follow a handful of people and listen  to (or rather, read) what they have to say.  You’ll very quickly pick  up the style of conversation that’s used and get an idea for what others  are chatting about.</p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p><em>Ask for followers.</em></p>
<p>There’s no point tweeting if no-one’s going to hear you &#8211; so don’t be  shy in asking for others to follow you.  You’ll often find that, when  you add a user to your list, they’ll add you to theirs in return.  Post  your new Twitter name on your Facebook update, or email your friends and  ask them to follow you.  So long as you’re tweeting interesting or  entertaining stuff, you’ll quickly start to build up a following (which  is why the ‘what I’m having for lunch’ crowd soon fade away).</p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p><em>Hashtags.</em></p>
<p><em> </em>One way of finding new people to follow &#8211; or simply to  learn more about a particular topic &#8211; is to use hashtags.  A hashtag is  simply a word with the hash symbol &#8211; # &#8211; in front of it.  When you click  on a hashtag, your Twitter client should show you all the tweets (by  everyone &#8211; not just those you follow) that have used that tag.  So, if  you want to find people on Twitter with whom to discuss the latest  episode of Doctor Who, simply search for tweets with the hashtag  #doctorwho.</p>
<p>One of the most popular hashtags is #ff &#8211; or Follow Friday.  This is  used every Friday for people to recommend twitter users as good  individuals to follow.  Post a few of these, and you should find  yourself names as a recommended tweeter by someone else.</p>
<p>If hashtags don’t make sense just yet &#8211; don’t worry!  It’s much simpler to see them in action than to describe it on paper!</p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p><em>Promote sensibly.</em></p>
<p>Just as you wouldn’t go to a party and try to sell copies of your  books to everyone there (at least, I hope you wouldn’t), out and out  sales talk is frowned upon on Twitter.  Yes, you can talk about your  books and what you have coming out &#8211; but if you ram it down your  followers’ throats, you could very quickly find yourself unfollowed or  blocked by them.</p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p><em>Retweeting.</em></p>
<p>If you see something you like on Twitter and think your own followers  would be interested in it, you can choose to resend that message or  ‘retweet’ it.  Quite simply, all that does is send the message out to  your followers along with the name of the person who originally posted  it.  Having your tweets retweeted is a great way to find new followers  so, the more entertaining your posts, the further they’ll go!</p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p><em>Links.</em></p>
<p>With just 140 characters per tweet &#8211; every letter counts!  So, when posting a link (also called a URL) to a web page (such as <a href="../blog/">http://www.tommydonbavand.com/blog/</a>) you should find that your Twitter client has the ability to shorten that link.  My client, Tweetie, has just shortened it to <a href="http://bit.ly/6Vbke">http://bit.ly/6Vbke</a> &#8211; a link that still goes to the exact same page, but has saved me some precious message space.</p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p><em>Pictures, Audio and Video.</em></p>
<p><em> </em>Twitter can also handle the tweeting of pictures, audio  files and even video clips.  Each of these has one or more free services  linked in with Twitter to host and display the media in question (for  example, pictures are often sent through sites such as Twitpic or the  bizarrely named Yfrog).  Have a root around in your client’s menu for  ways to attach photos and more to your tweets.</p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p><em>Have a go!</em></p>
<p>As with any new communication tool, the quickest way to learn how it  works is simply to dive right in and try it out.  And with Twitter  clients now available for most recent models of mobile phone, there’s no  reason why you can’t promote yourself and your books wherever you are.   Good luck!</p>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 09 May 2011 17:50:48 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Tommy Donbavand</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Admit it.  Go on&#8230;  Just to yourself.  You know you should be doing more to promote your books online.  Everybody&#8217;s talking about the benefits of it these days and, deep down, you&#8217;ve got that nagging feeling that you could be doing more. The problem is, no-one tells you how to promote yourself on the Internet.  [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><strong> </strong>Admit  it.  Go on&#8230;  Just to yourself.  You know you should be doing more to  promote your books online.  Everybody&#8217;s talking about the benefits of it  these days and, deep down, you&#8217;ve got that nagging feeling that you  could be doing more.</p>
<p>The problem is, no-one tells you how  to promote yourself on the Internet.  Everyone says you should use the  wonderful range on online resources to reach new readers but, whenever  you log on and run a quick search through Google, the seemingly millions  of results are confusing enough to make you switch off and reach for a  glass of wine.</p>
<p>So, I&#8217;m going to be different.  I&#8217;m not going to tell you why you should embrace new media &#8211; I&#8217;m going to show you how  you can easily set up the most important of promotional tools: the  writer&#8217;s website.  For some of you, I&#8217;ll be going over old ground but,  hopefully, there&#8217;ll be something for everyone in the information that  follows.  So, roll up your sleeves, power up that PC, and let&#8217;s dive  in&#8230;</p>
<p><strong>Get a website!</strong></p>
<p><img title="It's my website!" src="http://www.tommydonbavand.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/05/tdsite-300x212.jpg" alt="" width="230" height="162" align="left" />You  need a website.  No ifs, no buts.  I promise you that everyone from  curious agents to devoted fans will search for you online.  If they  don&#8217;t find your presence on the web, they may still read what you&#8217;ve  written &#8211; but you&#8217;ve just made them work that little bit harder for it.</p>
<p>Designing websites used to mean learning a host of new coding  disciplines, such as HTML and CSS &#8211; not to mention expensive or  confusing new software.  Thankfully, that&#8217;s no longer the case.  A  website of your own is just a few clicks away and, in the majority of  cases, either completely free or at very low cost indeed.</p>
<p>The website service I use is <strong>WordPress</strong> &#8211; <a href="http://www.wordpress.com" target="_blank"><strong>www.wordpress.com</strong></a> (where you host the site on their server) and <a href="http://www.wordpress.org" target="_blank"><strong>www.wordpress.org</strong></a> (where you host the site on your own rented webspace).  I use the  latter, as using your own webspace gives you more options to refine and  tweak your site.  Both options are 100% free of charge.</p>
<p>To sign up for a website hosted on their webspace, go to <strong>www.wordpress.com</strong> and click on &#8216;Sign up now&#8217; to get started.  You&#8217;ll find that the focus  of these sites are the blog pages &#8211; but don&#8217;t be put off.  While writing  a regular blog is a great way to promote yourself and your books  (constant fresh content &#8211; which the search engines love), you can choose  in the settings to have a static welcome page as the first page  visitors see when they arrive.</p>
<p>To host the site on your own webspace, go to <strong>www.wordpress.org</strong> and download the latest version.  This method is a little trickier, as  it requires you to upload and set up the framework and database to your  pre-rented webspace yourself &#8211; but there&#8217;s even a simple way to do  this&#8230;</p>
<p>I rent my webspace from a company called <strong>Hostgator</strong> &#8211; <a href="http://www.hostgator.com" target="_blank"><strong>www.hostgator.com</strong></a> &#8211; which costs $10.00 (around £6.60) a month.  For this, I get all the  webspace I need (I&#8217;ve got 5 sites on there and counting), unlimited  email addresses (having a separate &#8216;events&#8217; address really helps), free  24-hour online technical support, and a feature called Fantastico, that  sets up additional software &#8211; including WordPress &#8211; automatically with a  few clicks of the mouse.  So, whenever I want to set up a website, I  log into my Hostgator control panel, click on Fantastico, choose  WordPress and click &#8216;Install&#8217;.  It&#8217;s as simple as that.</p>
<p>The wonderful thing about WordPress as a CMS (Content Management  System) is that there are literally thousands of free template designs  out there to choose from to make your site look exactly the way you want  it.  Please take a moment to see what I mean by entering &#8216;free  WordPress themes&#8217; in Google.  Once you have WordPress up and running,  any and all of these templates are installed and activated with a few  clicks of the mouse.  Plus, almost all of these design themes can be  tweaked and adapted to fit your needs perfectly (although that does  require you to get your hands dirty with a little code).</p>
<p>As if near limitless designs wasn&#8217;t enough, WordPress allows you to  install &#8216;plug-ins&#8217; which add extra functionality to your site.  There  are thousands of free plug-ins available, covering everything from user  statistics (find out what your readers are searching for to find you),  to contact forms and podcasting features.  If you think your site needs  it &#8211; someone&#8217;s created a plug-in for it.  And, as ever, the vast  majority of them are 100% free.</p>
<p>A comparable alternative to WordPress is Google&#8217;s own <strong>Blogger</strong> service &#8211; go to <a href="http://www.blogger.com" target="_blank"><strong>www.blogger.com</strong></a> and click on &#8216;Create A Blog&#8217; &#8211; which allows you to set up a site,  either on the Blogger servers or your own.  As with WordPress, Blogger  allows you to customise your site with numerous free templates and  plug-ins &#8211; although there aren&#8217;t nearly as many, and the functionality  is much more limited.</p>
<p>Whether you choose WordPress or Blogger (or one of the other  available services), you need your own domain name.  In simple terms,  this means that people get to your website by typing in <strong>www.YOURNAME.com</strong> (in my case, <a href="http://www.tommydonbavand.com" target="_blank"><strong>www.tommydonbavand.com</strong></a>).   There are many top level domains (TLDs) available, but the only two you  need to worry about are .com and .co.uk  If you own both the <strong>YOURNAME.com</strong> and <strong>YOURNAME.co.uk</strong> domains, you&#8217;re pretty much covered.</p>
<p>I use a company called <strong>123-Reg</strong> to register all my domain names &#8211; <a href="http://www.123-reg.co.uk" target="_blank"><strong>www.123-reg.co.uk </strong></a>-  and it couldn&#8217;t be simpler.  Go to the 123-Reg site, enter the name  you&#8217;d like (usually either your own name, or the name of your  book/series) into the search field, and check if it&#8217;s available.  If so,  you can add the .co.uk and .com domains to your basket and proceed to  the checkout to buy them (at the time of writing, a .co.uk domain costs  £5.98 for 2 years, and a .com domain costs £19.98 for the same period).   If you want to add extra TLDs, such as .biz, .net or .org &#8211; go ahead,  although I&#8217;ve never found these to be useful.</p>
<p>If your domain name isn&#8217;t available, don&#8217;t despair.  Try a few  alternatives to see if you can get something that&#8217;s free (add a hyphen,  or the word &#8216;books&#8217; or &#8216;author&#8217; to the end).  This doesn&#8217;t always work; I  registered the UK domain for my Scream Street series &#8211; <a href="http://www.screamstreet.co.uk" target="_blank"><strong>www.screamstreet.co.uk </strong></a>-  early on, but the .com version had already been registered by another  individual.  You can often find out who the current owner of a domain  name is by clicking on the &#8216;Taken&#8217; or &#8216;Who is&#8217; link after the name.  I  did this for <a href="http://www.screamstreet.com" target="_blank"><strong>www.screamstreet.com</strong></a> and contacted the current owner, eventually buying the domain for $250 from him.  Hopefully, you&#8217;ll be luckier than me!</p>
<p>A purchased domain takes up to 24 hours to propagate the Internet  (register on all available servers) after which time, you can log into  the settings page and set up the domain to &#8216;point&#8217; to your current  WordPress or Blogger website.  This means, for example, whenever a user  types in <strong>www.YOURNAME.com</strong>, they&#8217;ll automatically be sent to <strong>www.YOURNAME.blogspot.com</strong> and won&#8217;t see the Blogger or WordPress part of the website title.</p>
<p>Now your website is up and running, and all you have to do is add the content&#8230;</p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p><strong>How to post on a WordPress website</strong></p>
<p>Here&#8217;s the step by step guide showing how to post on a WordPress  site.  If you&#8217;ve set yourself up on Blogger, you should still be able to  follow through by clicking on the responding buttons and links. My  apologies if I&#8217;ve made this too simplistic &#8211; but I wanted to make sure  everyone could follow it.</p>
<p>OK, roll up your sleeves, and let&#8217;s go&#8230;</p>
<p>1) Go to <strong>http://www.YOURDOMAIN.com/wp-login.php</strong> You might want to bookmark this page, as you&#8217;ll be going to it a lot.</p>
<p>2) Enter the username and password that you chose during the WordPress setup and click enter.</p>
<p>3) Welcome to the WordPress dashboard.  You can now choose to add a  new page to your site &#8211; or a new post to your blog.  To add a post,  click on &#8216;Posts&#8217; on the left hand menu, then &#8216;Add New&#8217;.  You can also  click on the little down arrow to the right of the word &#8216;Posts&#8217; and that  will allow you to click directly on the &#8216;Add New&#8217; link.  (You&#8217;ll see a  &#8216;Quick Post&#8217; option on the right, but I find it better to use the main  post window as Quick Post misses out on useful features).  If you want  to make an entire new page &#8211; such as &#8216;About Me&#8217; or &#8216;Events&#8217;, do the  exactly the same, but choosing from the &#8216;New Page&#8217; menu.</p>
<p>4) On the &#8216;Add New Post&#8217; page, click in the title bar below &#8216;Add New  Post&#8217; and type in the name of your post.  Then, write the piece itself  in the main box, formatting as you would in a word processor (bold,  italics, underline, centre, etc.)  If you want to add an image to your  post, click on the image symbol to the right of Upload/Insert at the top  of the box.  This will bring up a window where you can browse for your  photo, resize it, etc.  There are two options for uploading in this  window &#8211; Flash or Browser.  I sometimes have problems with the Flash  uploader, so usually use the Browser &#8211; but play about with it and see  what works best for you.</p>
<p>5) WordPress will autosave as you write, so there shouldn&#8217;t be any  problem with losing your post before it is finished.  If something does  go wrong, log back in and see if your post is saved as a draft.</p>
<p>6) You can add plug-ins at any time by clicking on Plugins in the  left hand menu and choosing Add New.  Enter keywords for the type of  plug-in you&#8217;re looking for, then choose from the results and click  &#8216;Install&#8217; to add this plug-in to your site.  Once installed, a plug-in  must be activated in order to work, so click to do that next.</p>
<p>The plug-ins I recommend using include:</p>
<p><strong>Askimet</strong> &#8211; this will stop people from leaving spam  comments on your blog posts.  You need what&#8217;s called an API  Key for  this to work, and you get one simply by registering your details at  wordpress.com.</p>
<p><strong>All In One SEO Pack</strong> &#8211; explained below.</p>
<p><strong>WordPress Database Backup</strong> &#8211; just in case something  goes wrong &#8211; this plug-in saves a back-up copy of your site&#8217;s raw data  every hour, day, or week depending on which option you choose.  It can  also automatically email a copy of that back-up to you.  I have all my  sites automatically back-up and email those files to me every Saturday.</p>
<p><strong>CyStat</strong> &#8211; a great plug-in for tracking your visitors and seeing just how they found your site.</p>
<p>7) To use the <strong>All In One SEO Pack</strong> plug-in &#8211; click on  the &#8216;All In One&#8217; SEO bar at the bottom of the page to open that  section.  This provides the post with information that search engines  like Google can use to find what you&#8217;ve written.  It&#8217;s NOT, however,  essential &#8211; so if it doesn&#8217;t make sense &#8211; don&#8217;t worry!  If you do decide  to fill in the SEO (Search Engine Optimisation) information, just  repeat your title, add a short sentence describing the post (i.e. &#8220;Tommy  borrows the latest exciting Artemis Fowl adventure from his local  library!&#8221;), then add some keywords that people might search for so they  can find your post, separated by commas (i.e. Tommy Donbavand, Artemis  Fowl, Eoin Colfer, library, book, exciting)  You only need a couple of  words or phrases (and this is why it&#8217;s better to use the main posting  page then the &#8216;Quick Post&#8217; option as you can&#8217;t add the SEO stuff that  way).</p>
<p> <img src='http://www.trappedbymonsters.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_cool.gif' alt='8)' class='wp-smiley' /> Choose a category or categories for your post and tick the box(es)  on the right. &#8211; or click the plus sign (+) to add a category of your  own.  I use categories such as &#8216;Books&#8217;, &#8216;Scream Street&#8217;, &#8216;Events&#8217;, and  so on.  Users can then browse the site by category to see what you&#8217;ve  written on the subject of &#8216;Books&#8217; for example).</p>
<p>9) When you&#8217;re happy with your post, click &#8216;Publish&#8217; and WordPress  will add your piece to the site.  Your name will be automatically added  to the post.</p>
<p>10) If you want to edit or change the post in any way, Go back to the  &#8216;Posts&#8217; menu on the left and choose &#8216;Edit&#8217;.  This will bring up a list  of all posts.  Hover your mouse over the name of the post, and a mini  menu will appear that says Edit | Quick Edit | Delete | View.  Again,  &#8216;Edit&#8217; is the one to choose, rather than &#8216;Quick Edit&#8217;.</p>
<p>Hopefully, this article will have helped you get started on the road  to setting up your own website.  The important thing to remember is not  to worry if you get stuck.  You can&#8217;t destroy the Internet &#8211; or even  your own site &#8211; by clicking around in the Dashboard and seeing what  everything does.</p>
<p>If you get stuck, simply run a search in Google for the problem and I  guarantee that someone, somewhere has had the same issue and described a  way around it.</p>
<p>It might help you to click through the pages and blog posts on this  website to see exactly what WordPress can do for you and your books.</p>
<p>Good luck!</p>
<p>Tommy</p>
<p>PS &#8211; Coming in part 2 &#8211; promoting your books using social media!</p>
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		<title>Phonetic Punctuation</title>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 10 Apr 2011 15:50:47 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Tommy Donbavand</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Punctuation marks are brilliant!  There&#8217;s one right there &#8211; at the end of that last sentence.  And other one there&#8230; Commas, full stops (called periods in America), and exclamation marks are just a few of the tools we can use in written language to make sure that what we want to say is understood by [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Punctuation marks are brilliant!  There&#8217;s one right there &#8211; at the end of that last sentence.  And other one there&#8230;</p>
<p>Commas, full stops (called periods in America), and exclamation marks are just a few of the tools we can use in written language to make sure that what we want to say is understood by someone else.</p>
<p>But what about spoken language?  Could punctuation be used there?  Check out this video where the late, great Danish comedian and pianist, <strong>Victor Borge</strong>, takes a look at what phonetic punctuation might sound like&#8230;</p>
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		<title>Wordies Episode 3</title>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 13 Mar 2011 21:20:35 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Tommy Donbavand</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Have you ever wondered what mistakes new writers make in approaching agents or publishers?  Or what is the greatest opening line of a novel?  Or why the topic of elf costumes would reduce two fully grown men into fits of giggles? Then Wordies is for you! Wordies is a new podcast for writers and by [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Have you ever wondered what mistakes new writers make in approaching  agents or publishers?  Or what is the greatest opening line of a novel?   Or why the topic of elf costumes would reduce two fully grown men into  fits of giggles?</p>
<p>Then <a href="http://www.wordies.co.uk" target="_blank"><strong>Wordies</strong></a> is for you!</p>
<p><a href="http://www.wordies.co.uk" target="_blank"><strong>Wordies</strong></a> is a new podcast for writers and by writers &#8211; featuring myself and   author, <a href="http://www.barryhutchison.com" target="_blank"><strong>Invisible  Fiends</strong><strong>Barry Hutchison</strong></a>.  We recently  recorded episode 3 while in Glasgow, having escaped the caves to appear at the <a href="http://www.ayewrite.com" target="_blank"><strong>Aye Write Book Festival</strong></a> &#8211; and  you can listen to it here: <a href="http://bit.ly/hdIUMS" target="_blank"><strong>http://bit.ly/hdIUMS</strong></a></p>
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