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Scream Street 2.0 Great news for UK Scream Street fans - the official Scream Street website has undergone something of a face lift! With spooky new graphics, a new downloads section and...

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Troll Time!

Posted on : 09-11-2009 | By : Tommy Donbavand
In : Illustrations!

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I’m delighted to reveal the cover for Scream Street 8: Attack of the Trolls – to be published in April 2010.

Scream Street 8: Attack of the Trolls

I think this is one of the best covers of the series so far – and the book itself is packed with action, plot twists and rather smelly troll droppings…

Tommy

Scotia Travelling Book Festival

Posted on : 08-11-2009 | By : Tommy Donbavand
In : Author Events!

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Well, I’m back from Scotland where I was honoured to take part in this year’s Scotia Travelling Book Festival, arranged by the wonderful people at Scotia Books.

How I always want my books set out from now on!

I couldn’t have had a better time, with three action-packed school events and getting to spend time in the Scotia Books warehouse, from where some of the best books available are dispatched worldwide with, frankly, frightening efficiency!  Plus, these guys really know how to look after an author (fellow children’s writers – you will NOT regret getting in touch with these people!)

Schools I’ve already visited will know that I use Scotia Books to deliver copies of Scream Street to my events for pupils to buy and have signed – but I recommend them to anyone who needs anything from a single book to an entire Accelerated Reader library, and prefers to use an experienced, friendly independent supplier over a faceless chain of superstores.

You can contact Scotia Books on 01236 826041 or by emailing info@scotiaandchameleon.com Chances are, you’ll probably find me back up there having a cup of tea or planning another curry!

Tommy

Blue Peter Book Awards

Posted on : 08-11-2009 | By : Tommy Donbavand
In : Brilliant Books!, Important Announcement!

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Blue Peter Book AwardsWell, I left it a few days to see if Ali was going to mention it herself – but she hasn’t, so I will…

The utterly brilliant Frozen in Time by TBM’s own Ali Sparkes has been shortlisted for the Blue Peter Book Awards!  Nominated in the category of Book I Couldn’t Put Down, Frozen in Time will be competing against Cosmic by Frank Cottrell Boyce and The Boy Who Fell Down Exit 43 by Harriet Goodwin.

Here at Trapped By Monsters, we’ve all got our fingers (and tentacles) crossed that Ali’s exciting tale of culture clash will be the winner!

Wow. Just… wow.

Posted on : 07-11-2009 | By : Sam Enthoven
In : Brilliant Books!, Video

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Click here for a video extract from Witchfinder – Dawn of the Demontide, by William Hussey. And get ready to shiver.

The book’s not out ’til March 2010. I’m already a fan of William’s writing for adults, so I was intrigued when I heard about his upcoming YA trilogy. Now, having seen this video, I can hardly wait!

Strange sighting at Buckingham Palace

Posted on : 06-11-2009 | By : Barry Hutchison
In : General

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Someone who wishes to remain anonymous contacted me via my own website today, enclosing a photograph they thought I might find interesting. The photograph is of the Queen’s London residence – Buckingham Palace – and it shows… Well, why not look for yourself? Click the image to make it larger.

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Mr Mumbles on your desktop

Posted on : 06-11-2009 | By : Barry Hutchison
In : Brilliant Books!, General

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I’ve got a hundred things I really should be doing today, but rather than tackle anything constructive I’ve put together an Invisible Fiends wallpaper for your computer desktop.

There are two sizes available at the moment. To put Mr Mumbles’ charming face on your desktop, simply click one of the images below. Then, when it has loaded in a new window, right click on the image and choose “set as desktop background”, “set as wallpaper” or something along those lines (depending on which browser you’re using). That should be all you need to do.

Desktop 1: 1280 x 1024

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Desktop 2: 1024 x 768

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JETHRO’S ACE OF HEARTS – Slice 3 of 13

Posted on : 06-11-2009 | By : Sam Enthoven
In : Illustrations!, Stories!

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JETHRO’S ACE OF HEARTS

a thirteen-part story, EXCLUSIVE to Trapped By Monsters

story (c) Sam Enthoven / illustrations (c) David Melling, 2009. All rights reserved.

(Click here for previous slices: First ; Second)

-Third Slice-

Sorry?‘ asked Jethro.

Mr Theophilus leaned forward. His cape fell open as he did so, revealing his fine three-piece suit of dark brown velvet and the pale flower he was wearing in his buttonhole. The flower looked like a rose, but one still in bud, its colour not yet formed. Though his head continued to nod, Jethro’s eyes fixed on the flower, which glowed pale green from Mr Theophilus’ shapely lapel. He may have noticed the tiny blue and red veins in the delicate petals. He may have smelt the strange, sweet smell.

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I too have an interest in serial killers,’ said Mr Theophilus, still nodding hypnotically, ‘and I possess certain techniques, certain proofs, that may answer all your questions about “Saucy Jack” and his brethren once and for all.’ He paused. ‘I live just a short distance from here. Would you like me to show you?’

Abruptly Jethro appeared to realise he’d been nodding too.

‘I guess,’ he said. He gave another wobbling shrug. ‘Sure. Yeah: OK.’

‘Splendid! That’s settled, then. Step this way! Oh, and do allow me to introduce myself: I’m Mr Theophilus.’ His eyebrows lifted, ‘I didn’t quite catch…?’

‘Jethro,’ said Jethro.

‘Ah yes, quite so.’ Mr. Theophilus’ tongue flicked around his teeth. ‘Well then, Jethro,’ he said, as if tasting the name, ‘follow me!’

-Click here for Slice Four-

Research, Research

Posted on : 05-11-2009 | By : Sam Enthoven
In : Site Stuff, The Monsters, Writing Advice

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Two items of Q&A for you. ;)

The first is something I was asked this week via the MySpace page of Jagmat from The Black Tattoo. Huge respect and kudos – partly just for not letting the whole shapeshifting blancmange monster thing put him off! – to Mykell, from Maryland, USA, who wondered:

What kind of research do u do when u are writing ur books?

Research… hmm. If you’re talking about facts and figures, details of setting and time and place and action… it depends.

I think details are important, especially in a fantasy story: they give the reader something to hang onto; they make things seem real. For instance, I got the fight scenes in Black Tat checked out by genuine martial artists. While I was writing the book, I met a lady at a party who turned out to be the ranking Number 3 North European Women’s Sabre Champion! She was wonderfully sporting about reading Black Tat‘s swordfights for me: I got these excellent emails from her saying, ‘Well, ok: if I was fighting a thirty-foot-long hedgehog centipede beast, I suppose I’d start off on the back foot, with this sort of a grip…’ and off she went. I hope those kinds of details give some realistic weight and crunch to Black Tat‘s fights. And if a story needs other kinds of information, I’ll find out everything I can.

But here’s the thing: that stuff should only ever be in service to the story. The story comes first. Because no amount of detail is going to make the readers care if they’re not involved in the scene, feeling for the characters, wondering what’s going to happen next.

The story is the hard bit – the main thing to focus on – it seems to me.

…Which brings me to my second question.

Jethrosplatter

Slice Three of JETHRO’S ACE OF HEARTS, the thirteen-part story I’m currently serializing here on TBM, goes live for your delectation tomorrow (Friday) at 12 noon GMT.

My current plan is to have Slice Four go up this Monday, Slice Five go up next Friday, and so on. But a couple of my fellow prisoners (looking at you, David and Barry!) think I should go up to three episodes a week – posting on Wednesdays, too.

You, reading this: Hello! What do you think?

I think savouring the story slowly would be best – three slices a week might dominate the blog, and the story would finish very quickly. Or am I just being mean and stingy?

Leave a comment either way. I’m all ears.

…No, Bluggsvo Multilug, don’t get up: I was speaking metaphorically. No (sigh) I’m not really ‘all ears’: if you had eyes as well as ears you would be able see that. Of course I think you have ‘nice lobes’ but no, we’re absolutely not ‘destined to be together’. No: leave me alone! NO! Stop! The wax! THE WAGGLING! AAGHlp

A Thing About Writing That I Do

Posted on : 05-11-2009 | By : Joe Craig
In : Writing Advice

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I gave a talk the other day called something like ‘Writing for Children: generating ideas and writing that children will actually be interested in.’ I can’t remember the exact title. It was a bit long and to be honest I have trouble remembering titles that are more than three words.
 
Anyway, I thought I might break down some of the things I talked about into blog-sized chunks for your delight and entertainment. Obviously you won’t have the benefit of my exciting and surprising powerpoint presentation that originally accompanied the ordeal, but you have other benefits, such as tea, your own comfy chair and the invitation to imagine that I’m giving this talk in any voice you like. I suggest Yosemite Sam for starters.
 
So… Writing for Children, Tip 1: Don’t test it out on a child.
 
I don’t hear many published authors telling people to test out their writing on a child. However, I do hear lots of aspiring writers saying that they’ve done just that – they gave something they wrote to a child they know, and the child loved it. I don’t recommend that strategy.
 
First of all, the child you test things out on is going to want to like it. Not liking it would be awkward and to tell you so would be borderline sociopathic.
 
Second, even if the child can identify some moments or aspects of your writing that they don’t like as much, they will struggle to tell you why. That doesn’t just apply to children – people in general are much better at saying they don’t like something than giving accurate feedback as to what should change so that they would like it.
 
Third, who’s the writer in this scenario? You or the kid? Most of the time (not all, but most) testing your work-in-progress on a child is a sign that deep down you know there’s something not quite right with it. You probably even know what that is, you just don’t want to face it. You’re probably showing your story to a kid with the over-optimistic hope that he or she will smile and laugh and jump up and down and tell you that you don’t need to fix a word. Because any other reaction would mean that you have a lot more work to do, right? Well, here’s the bad news: that reaction would mean nothing even if you got it (see points one and two). And there is definitely more work you can do on your story. Chances are you know that already and you actually just wanted a get-out-of-work-free card from having child’s seal of approval.
 
When I write, I write for me. I don’t aim at a particular child, or children in general, or even the impression of a child that I nostalgically believe I once was.
 
No individual child can give you a reaction that’s indicative of all children.
 
If you really want to test out your story on a kid you might want to try one of two things: give them a few pages to read, and WATCH THEM read it. When do their eyes wander? When do they sit forward in their seat? When are they sluggish turning the page? When do they race through the paragraphs with their mouth slightly open?
 
Or, even better - pitch them the story. Take ten minutes. If you can’t tell a story in ten minutes, it isn’t worth telling. Five is better. Sit face to face and watch as you tell the story. If you’re honest with yourself about the reaction you’re seeing, you should have all the feedback you need right there.
 
One last thing: if you’re thinking of testing things out on a child, why not test something out on an adult instead? After all, adults are really just stupid children. You’ll get most of the same feedback. But make sure to tell them not to try to work out whether they think the story will work on a child. Eliminate second-guessing. Just let them enjoy it for themselves.
 
A good story is a good story, whatever the intended audience.
As always, I’ll be fascinated to hear my fellow cave dwellers’ take on this. And everyone else too of course. Do you test your work on children?

Out and About

Posted on : 05-11-2009 | By : David Melling
In : General

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Mark & Me

Visual proof that we are allowed out from time to time. Mark and myself did such a good job (apparently), at The Bookstore, Abingdon last weekend, we’re doing it again this weekend. On Saturday 7th November, we’ll be at Waterstones, Oxford from 10.00am. Please come. If you don’t we’ll be shoved back in the cave before you can say ‘please don’t sit on us with those wet tentacles.’