JETHRO’S ACE OF HEARTS
a thirteen-part story, EXCLUSIVE to Trapped By Monsters
story (c) Sam Enthoven / illustrations (c) David Melling, 2009. All rights reserved.
(Click here for previous slices: First ; Second)
-Third Slice-
‘Sorry?‘ asked Jethro.
Mr Theophilus leaned forward. His cape fell open as he did so, revealing his fine three-piece suit of dark brown velvet and the pale flower he was wearing in his buttonhole. The flower looked like a rose, but one still in bud, its colour not yet formed. Though his head continued to nod, Jethro’s eyes fixed on the flower, which glowed pale green from Mr Theophilus’ shapely lapel. He may have noticed the tiny blue and red veins in the delicate petals. He may have smelt the strange, sweet smell.
‘I too have an interest in serial killers,’ said Mr Theophilus, still nodding hypnotically, ‘and I possess certain techniques, certain proofs, that may answer all your questions about “Saucy Jack” and his brethren once and for all.’ He paused. ‘I live just a short distance from here. Would you like me to show you?’
Abruptly Jethro appeared to realise he’d been nodding too.
‘I guess,’ he said. He gave another wobbling shrug. ‘Sure. Yeah: OK.’
‘Splendid! That’s settled, then. Step this way! Oh, and do allow me to introduce myself: I’m Mr Theophilus.’ His eyebrows lifted, ‘I didn’t quite catch…?’
‘Jethro,’ said Jethro.
‘Ah yes, quite so.’ Mr. Theophilus’ tongue flicked around his teeth. ‘Well then, Jethro,’ he said, as if tasting the name, ‘follow me!’
06/11/2009 at 12:49 pm Permalink
This just gets better and better. Roll on Monday lunchtime!
06/11/2009 at 2:32 pm Permalink
i thought parts of it would be longer, but to be fair it is a 13 part story
06/11/2009 at 2:49 pm Permalink
Hi Scott!
The slices are all about twenty lines long. With an illustration that seemed like a nice, approachable blog-post size. But I’m very much feeling my way here: this whole thing is pretty experimental.
Re going up to three slices a week, you’re swaying me! However: I’ve also had one vote today on my Facebook in favour of keeping it to two. Confusion!
Let’s see if I’ve got a better idea of how people feel by the time the next slice goes up on Monday.
Thanks for your help!
All best wishes to you,
Sam
PS: David’s pic for the next one is GORGEOUS.
06/11/2009 at 7:48 pm Permalink
i look forward to it!