Comments on: Poetry Challenge – my entry http://www.trappedbymonsters.com/2009/04/poetry-challenge-my-entry/ Fri, 03 Feb 2012 16:20:34 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Simon MacDonald http://www.trappedbymonsters.com/2009/04/poetry-challenge-my-entry/comment-page-1/#comment-660 Simon MacDonald Thu, 30 Apr 2009 15:36:15 +0000 http://www.trappedbymonsters.com/?p=1555#comment-660 watch this space - see what I did there? Keeping the lunar thing going...never mind... watch this space – see what I did there? Keeping the lunar thing going…never mind…

]]> By: Ali Sparkes http://www.trappedbymonsters.com/2009/04/poetry-challenge-my-entry/comment-page-1/#comment-658 Ali Sparkes Thu, 30 Apr 2009 07:53:36 +0000 http://www.trappedbymonsters.com/?p=1555#comment-658 OK - now put them in a poem, Simon! OK – now put them in a poem, Simon!

]]> By: Simon MacDonald http://www.trappedbymonsters.com/2009/04/poetry-challenge-my-entry/comment-page-1/#comment-654 Simon MacDonald Wed, 29 Apr 2009 12:59:18 +0000 http://www.trappedbymonsters.com/?p=1555#comment-654 sooner...Deportivo La Coruna...Gooner...sorry, Ali...gone a bit footie-related... sooner…Deportivo La Coruna…Gooner…sorry, Ali…gone a bit footie-related…

]]> By: Ali Sparkes http://www.trappedbymonsters.com/2009/04/poetry-challenge-my-entry/comment-page-1/#comment-650 Ali Sparkes Mon, 27 Apr 2009 20:15:36 +0000 http://www.trappedbymonsters.com/?p=1555#comment-650 Impressive scanning and rhyming - it all passes the reading aloud test. Was going to tick you off for overstepping the eight lines rule (and technically you can't win) but it's really too good to confine in any way... And what a great opening for a new novel! Can anyone raise the bar further on rhymes for lunar? I bottled it completely... Impressive scanning and rhyming – it all passes the reading aloud test. Was going to tick you off for overstepping the eight lines rule (and technically you can’t win) but it’s really too good to confine in any way…

And what a great opening for a new novel! Can anyone raise the bar further on rhymes for lunar? I bottled it completely…

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]]> By: Joe Craig http://www.trappedbymonsters.com/2009/04/poetry-challenge-my-entry/comment-page-1/#comment-645 Joe Craig Mon, 27 Apr 2009 01:01:34 +0000 http://www.trappedbymonsters.com/?p=1555#comment-645 I've just noticed that I was meant to do this is no more than 8 lines. Well, I've used no more than 8 stanzas. Oops. Sorry. I’ve just noticed that I was meant to do this is no more than 8 lines.
Well, I’ve used no more than 8 stanzas.
Oops.
Sorry.

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