David’s second poetry challenge

Following Mark’s poetry challenge (posted April 20th), here’s my mournful effort…

 

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CLOUD

Upon the air there hung a cloud,

A most unpleasant smell.

Could it be my Grandma’s feet?

It’s very hard to tell.

 

Or maybe next door neighbour’s pet,

A llama, white as snow.

They call him Loony Lunar,

But why? I do not know.

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